Research Question
How should we evaluate Social Network? How do they influence to teenager?
Thesis Statement
We should know both positive and negative aspects. Finally I support Social Network as a good tool. We should use it with judgement and think critically and carefully.
Ⅰ. Introduction
A. Current situation of Social Network
a. Various kinds of Social Network
Facebook/Twitter/Myspace/Linkedin
b. Statistic on the number of Social Network users
79% (Social networking sites and our lives)
92% (Facebook) 13% (Twitter)
B. Thesis Statement
Ⅱ. Positive aspect
A. In-group (Family/Friends)
Chatting/Message/Sharing photo, video and music
B. Out-group (Business)
Advertisement
C. New-group (To meet new people)
Ⅲ. Negative aspect
A. Privacy problem
Open to the public about privacy
B. Reliability of information
Making a confusion
C. Discrimination/Bullying
By using photos,diary
Ⅳ. Conclusion
A. Repeat thesis and main points
B. Solution (How to protect teenager from some dangerous)
Rena,
返信削除This is a good basic outline for starting the draft, so good luck with writing it!
You probably will want to make your thesis a little more specific by adding words such as
Thesis: SNS users should maximize the benefits of the services such as ___ and __. However, at the same time, they should be careful to avoid risks such as ___ and ___.
Good luck with explaining those with examples!