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I really enjoyed this presentation. This time was the first time for me to make a presentation, so it was difficult to make how to arrange and summary my essay's content in just 20 pages and 20 seconds. However, this was very useful for me to rethink my topic. Especially, when I had to make a short sentence or keywords in one pages, I could think what I wanted to convey again.

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Research Question

How Social media influences communication?

Thesis Statement

Social media develops and supports communication. After both positive and negative aspects are based on, we should use Social media effectively.

Ⅰ. Introduction

  A. Current situation of Social media

a.(Hook) Negative question of Social media

b. (Background)

1. Definition of Social media

        Social network (Facebook/Twitter)/Youtube/Ustream

         2. Definition of the ‘Disconnected community’

  B. Thesis Statement

Ⅱ.Negative aspect

  A. The decline of real communication

     a. The problem of grammar/word

     b. The problem of nonverbal communication (eye contact)

  B. The problem of social withdrawal

C. Privacy problem (Social network)

     Sexual harassment/bullying

  D. Reliability of information

Ⅲ. Positive aspect

  A. One good tool of communication

     a. With friends/family

     b. With business

     c. With new people

B. The release from complicated communication

C. Equality of sharing all opinion or idea

D. Feedback

Ⅳ. Conclusion

  A. Repeat thesis and main points

B. Future of Social media


econsultancy.com/us/blog/4636-does-social-media-kill-communication-and-people-skills
www.gantthead.com/blog/The-Project-Shrink/2025/
econsultancy.com/us/blog/4636-does-social-media-kill-communication-and-people-skills

I have to find more works cited, but I didn't do that yet. Until this Friday's due of first draft I'll do that absolutely,  so please forgive me.   Rena

Outline

Research Question

How should we evaluate Social Network? How do they influence to teenager?

Thesis Statement

We should know both positive and negative aspects. Finally I support Social Network as a good tool. We should use it with judgement and think critically and carefully.

Ⅰ. Introduction

  A. Current situation of Social Network

a. Various kinds of Social Network

     Facebook/Twitter/Myspace/Linkedin

b. Statistic on the number of Social Network users

     79% (Social networking sites and our lives)

     92% (Facebook) 13% (Twitter)

  B. Thesis Statement

Ⅱ. Positive aspect

  A. In-group (Family/Friends)

     Chatting/Message/Sharing photo, video and music

  B. Out-group (Business)

     Advertisement

  C. New-group (To meet new people)

Ⅲ. Negative aspect

  A. Privacy problem

     Open to the public about privacy

  B. Reliability of information

     Making a confusion

  C. Discrimination/Bullying

     By using photos,diary

Ⅳ. Conclusion

  A. Repeat thesis and main points

B. Solution (How to protect teenager from some dangerous) 

Essay "The Problem of Social Network"

The reason why I chose "The Problem of Social Network" is because social network is related with our daily life. There are a lot of social network, for example, Facebook, Twitter, Myspace and mixi.

It is very popular. This site shows some research of relation or percentage to social network.

Social network has both positive and negative points.
'POSITIVE'
We can chat with friends, write daily events, share photos and videos and so on. In business, they can use them to appeal their products or events as well. It is really useful to communicate and share information. For example, if we cannot use system of mail or calling, we can use social network instead.

'NEGATIVE'
1.Privacy problem All people can access to our profile. There are name, photos, birth of date or town etc...so we have no privacy. Therefore some people use social network to meet unknown people for sexual problems.

2.Reliability of information Everyone can spread and share information. People tend to receive them without doubts. It sometimes makes a confusion. Worst of all, it leads to frauds.

3.Discrimination(Bulling) Someone who have social network's account vs Someone who doesn't have them
The former tends to feel collectivism and consider the latter as other group. On the other hand, the latter tends to feel isolated.


My opinion & Solution
I think social network is good if we use it as a just one of tools. We should use it critically. When we receive information, we should judge it by ourselves. We should have responsibility.
We can set up profile or photos to just family and friends.

Works sited
www.life123.com/parenting/tweens-teens/social-networking/issues-with-teens-and-social-networking.shtml
www.information-management.com/specialreports/2009_165/social_networking_media-10016208-1.html?pg=2
nylawblog.com/2009/02/legal-problems-of-social-networks/